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please revise this paragraph.

Combine two or more sentences in your paragraph for varied syntax.
_____Review your paragraph for any use of passive voice. Revise those sentences.
_____Highlight the areas that you make changes.
Dangers of cell phones

The world has a growing population of tragedy because of people using their cellphones just think about it if people start using their devices with caution it would decrease the health problems and death population numerously not only that, but they have become a distraction to a lot of people. 5 percent of people that uses cell phones have stated that it makes it a lot easier to forget about their priorities like work Home and giving people their undivided attention. The cellphone is a major part of our economy and communications system despite their popularity there are some downsides to our cellular devices they have been causing a lot of tragedy’s and problems, it’s hard to imagine where we would be without cellular devices.


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  • Passive voice is used to describe and attend the actions that a person does, and it does not focus on the person who does the action.

    The Passive voice is recognized when the written has:

    Subject + Verb TO BE (conjuged) + Verb in Past Participle + Complement of sentence..


    The world has a growing population of tragedy because of people using their cellphones just think about it if people start using their devices with caution it would decrease the health problems and death population numerously not only that, but they have become a distraction to a lot of people. 5 percent of people that uses cell phones have stated that it makes it a lot easier to forget about their priorities like work Home and giving people their undivided attention. The cellphone is a major part of our economy and communications system despite their popularity there are some downsides to our cellular devices they have been causing a lot of tragedy’s and problems, it’s hard to imagine where we would be without cellular devices.

  • I'm literally doing this right now, are u lazy or something because you wrote that paragraph yourself and your telling people to revise it for you. Brainly is not for cheating and if someone did answer this question, even if they got it wrong you should give them brainliest for trying there best. T.T

    Hope you understand what I mean (no offense)

    Have a good day!